The drums feel quite lacking, this could be fixed by compressing them more and maybe adding harder hitting transients! The chords also feel quite lacking, adding a buzz bass and a fatter sub-bass could help with bringing out the chords, the chords themselves could use a rhythmic aspect to them to make it seem much more alive and fluent!
There's a lot of clipping in the build ups that can tend to annoy people, you could cut some low end and reduce volume to make it quieter than the drop to help with this!
more FX and ear candies could be used, as well as (in the second drop) having the sounds be more rhythmical! I also noticed one of the basses are out of key for the last drop(?)
This is a great beginning to producing and I hope to see more later :D