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AkiriMusic

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Extremely clean stuff here, good neuro basses, clear concepts and relatively good mixing.
:3

this song has helped me in more ways than one, thank you.

The drums feel quite lacking, this could be fixed by compressing them more and maybe adding harder hitting transients! The chords also feel quite lacking, adding a buzz bass and a fatter sub-bass could help with bringing out the chords, the chords themselves could use a rhythmic aspect to them to make it seem much more alive and fluent!
There's a lot of clipping in the build ups that can tend to annoy people, you could cut some low end and reduce volume to make it quieter than the drop to help with this!
more FX and ear candies could be used, as well as (in the second drop) having the sounds be more rhythmical! I also noticed one of the basses are out of key for the last drop(?)
This is a great beginning to producing and I hope to see more later :D

GeorgesStuff responds:

wise words

ClubbinMusic responds:

Hey, bro! Of course I'm happy with your opinion, but there are already tracks that are better than this nonsense. Can you listen and give your opinion?

lacks a lot of structure, a lot of elements as well, most sections just feel empty, to fix this you could add arpeggios, white noise, more drums (hi hats and such) and other smaller ear candies to work with the rest of the track! The mixing isn't all there, the growls are a nice touch, but most of the other sounds are really weak and drowned out, the chords could use a bit more high end, more crisp to them.
That's about all

Unless you’re trying to use polytonality it’s very out of key

1gryone responds:

Thanks for your feedback. I am

Your local full flavor rhythm game producer.

Akiri Bléu @AkiriMusic

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